Friday, July 15, 2011

The Desire


This is my first attempt at 55 fictions*.

I carefully avoid you. Obscurely change paths not to come across you. Each day dawns with fierce determinations to baulk my need for you. Still at night, I see myself opening the door for you and as I gobble you up, my delectable chocolate bar, I count the calories and tell myself,” Just this once".


*- Okei now let me be honest. This was a piece of my heart I shared on face book after I had a brief yet intense meeting with my weighing machine. My half yearly performances weren’t up to the mark, said the square faced monster with scales.
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14 comments:

  1. Spaceman SpiffJuly 15, 2011 at 1:14 PM

    :D Haha.. Classic you. :) And what does the monster know?! He's square-faced after all! :P Get a round-faced one, it might just show a better figure (pun very much intended).

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  2. Blue LotusJuly 15, 2011 at 1:18 PM

    :P,,the monster is not supposed to be nasty.The way he jumps scales when I climb on it.Duh!

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  3. RookieJuly 15, 2011 at 7:52 PM

    Nice one. I liked it

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  4. Red HandedJuly 16, 2011 at 12:08 AM

    GUILTY PLEASURE I SAY!!
    I shout for MERCY as i see the figures rising in the weighing machine~!
    I Wonder how life would have been if the world ran opposite..i mean you eat junk and you slim down!

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  5. raam pyariJuly 16, 2011 at 8:43 PM

    Lovely! excellent for a first attempt!!

    following your blog now :)

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  6. joshi danielJuly 17, 2011 at 9:53 PM

    hehe that's cool :D

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  7. Blue LotusJuly 18, 2011 at 2:48 PM

    @Rookie:Thank You dear.
    @Red Handed: I wish I wish,I would've been a Miss Universe by now :D...
    @RP:Thank you.Loved your blog too..

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  8. Blue LotusJuly 18, 2011 at 2:50 PM

    @Joshi Daniel: Wow Thanks.Happy to see a comment from you..

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  9. Beyond HorizonJuly 26, 2011 at 5:15 PM

    just don't suppress the desire and the temptations, enjoy it without thinking the square faced monster...there would be some way to scare him away :)

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  10. raam pyariJuly 27, 2011 at 4:29 AM

    ph my god! you are too good! You must visit this place on FB :D Flash fiction contest!

    https://www.facebook.com/topic.php?topic=125&post=474&uid=190916240958048#post474

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  11. Blue LotusJuly 28, 2011 at 9:10 AM

    @RP:Thanks a lot..I'll give the link a try.
    @Beyond Horizon:I hardly do...;-)..

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    Great! That's a unique post! I really like it because I haven't landed yet on a blog that discusses what's good about our health.

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  13. KPSeptember 8, 2011 at 8:04 PM

    Hey that is a good one with a chocolatey twist..!

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  14. Blue LotusSeptember 9, 2011 at 11:54 PM

    @KP:Anything for chocolate

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